Yozan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Love, Honeydew!]

Like it because of the the Beatles inspiration!

Animation-S responds:

Thank you! The singer has a lot of fun writing and finding the music. :)

[African zombie slut]

Why did you upload it now? It's like more than a month left until Halloween, you could have worked more with this ^^

flashmakeit responds:

I think I am going to take this out of the contest and make another one that is scarier.

[Vattaman The Mans-Spankcula]

I like it that you are original but your intros are too long and missleading. The title says "how to draw" but with all the logos and so on makes it as if it was a movie.
The song... it gave me a headache with all the different sounds ... sorry. Next time try to make it shorter but keep it in your style. Work on ^^

ToonymanStudios responds:

sorry for all that, but this was like an old project I had left behind (like a lost episode). I still have like 10 more that I like to release but i been between school, work and community services. so i have not had alot of time to properly make these. but one thing for sure these are all just pilots. you should read the description. non of these episodes are the real thing as they are for showing you (as per the title) what I plan on including into the real episodes. from real how to's and real show and tells.

this is the introductory series which is part 0 of 5 different types of series. no actual work should be expected from this series which has a total of 50 episode of me showing what to expect from the real series. and the music was also old tracks I created hopefully when i get time i will create better songs (FYI not that great with music). I could use some free ones but i wanted to keep everything original kinda like giving people a full show that is 100% natural and original. i aim to making this a great show for the real series i'm still working on the details.

[Mya Bub]

It was cute, but it was very short and didn't have any purpose. I do understand if it only was a "try-out" but we both agree that you could have done more with this. You clearly have potential! Sorry if I rated it 2-stars... but if you put more effort into this, you will go further! :)

VideaVice responds:

No problem. I need to find a program I'm confortable with and a subject and then I'd make a longer animation. Thanks for your comment.

[Strong Viking Obstacle Run]

When I first saw this animation I thougt it was commercial for an app game or something. Good thing you put a link in the description!
This is just my opinion.. but would it not be more suiteable if you said something like "Even if you are a sheep, act like a Viking"? Like the strongviking website says "They are made" ^^
Despite this, Good Job! I like the style you made it in!

Artcraft responds:

Thx for your interpretation and positiv feedback.

[Disgaea The Dark Adonis]

Is it something about Code Geass perhaps? ^^'
What is the story? Maybe you could write about it in the description? :)

princenoble responds:

Ok watch it againa

[Cal in Cartoon - Episode Eleven]

You wrote in a post at your page that you used flash for over a decade before using GoAnimate. Do you have any material left, from back then, uploaded somewhere? ^^

calmulligan responds:

YouTube: "Starship One". And there's possibly a show called "Tragic Happiness" still on newgrounds under an old account somewhere :/ ...I should look for that actually; would be good to see how terrible I was :)

[Pyro]

Great work! ^^

Arfri responds:

Thanks!

[Harold & Margaret: Devil's Advocate]

Hm... the idea was nice but it was kinda hard to know whom was talking when they both had the same voice and didn't move while talking.

My advice: Make it clearer with more animation (movements).
Add more effects, example the fire in the background could have been burning with three simple frames or mouths while speaking (Y)

I watched your other animations and if this is your style, go on! but adding that little nodding and so on makes it clearer.

Keep on creating!

SeveralHatProduction responds:

great feedback! Only began animating 4 days ago so i'm not quite at the point where i feel like i can do lip syncing on my characters but i'll definitely add nodding or some sort of indication. I'll try make the difference in their voices a little clearer too.

[The saddest cartoon evah]

well, I didn't understand ANYTHING of the context until I looked at your Newgrounds profile but it is a improvement compared to the earlier animation, nice!

Are you using Flash?

Titidagyk responds:

Yep, I'm a noob with flash, i just buy it like two weeks ago, i made my last animation or the one that you just see, In one day, thanks for the feedback, it really help me to keep doing animations n.n and yep, i know that isn't to much the improvement of the last and this but, i really aprecciate that you see it n.n, like i say, i just make this animation on likeeeee 10 hours, beside it, i really aprecciate all the feedback that i get, thanks again for comment n.n