Yozan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Peaceful Afternoon]

Why didn't you make an animation out of this? Toonz is free to download (Y)

darkaraya02 responds:

no thanks I like my animation system more. but I'll keep it in mind, thanks bro

["True Story"]

Haha got a good chuckle! Great job with the colors and the content was really funny.

ChutneyGlaze responds:

Thanks my dude!

[Vikings]

Haha det skrek "svenskt" om animationen! Bra jobbat :D Måste ha varit roligt qatt studera i Japan! Jag vill lätt se fler saker från dig ^^

Skogur responds:

Tack, vad roligt att du tyckte så! Det har vart en upplevelse att plugga här kan man säga. Ska försöka lägga i lite nu och få upp lite mer grejer. ..och tack för att du ville bli mitt fan förresten! ^^

[The Journal]

This was really good made! Nice animation and use of colours. The only thing to have in mind was the tempo. It felt kind of hasty, if you slow it down a little (for example when he was walking along the cliff) it would have given a feeling if something dangerous and fatal could happen.
Otherwise, really good!

TheCartoonJournal responds:

Thank You!,I Definitely agree with you on the tempo, I did get hasty near the end, many more to come however!

[Una Historia de Zelda Animada| Parodia | Capitulo 1]

I thought this was really good! The animation was good, nice perspective and funny references, like when Link looks like primal SpongeBob . The only issue was the language … I didn’t understand anything and it would have been appreciated if it was subbed. So my feedback refers to the visual! Nice work 😊

CaricanimaStudio responds:

You can see the subtitled chapter on youtube https://youtu.be/wubn1TtQLm4, I do not know if you can put subtitles here. But good that you liked the chapter.

[Sonic of thrones]

The Animation was really good and the voices made me chuckle. The end? well I almost vomited, really good work!

OrganizedApeShape responds:

aw thanks

[King Gooze outro]

It was good and I agree with Tyguy80s. Would like to see something more (I do know it's an intro but it was kinda short, ya know what we mean).
The only thing to say is that the audio was pretty low! Don't forget to turn the volume up when uploading with a episode! ^^

KingGooze responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism. I'm glad it wasn't just regular criticism, I just barely seen these comments cuz I'm busy but I wanna make more videos one day

[Something Worse]

I must say it was a good vibe from it. Nasty sound, scary atmosphere and so on but it was lacking in content and the background music was rather dominant! Couldn’t almost hear what your were saying .. but otherwise keep up the good work.

CutesyKreepy responds:

Hey, thanks. The genuine critique is a very welcome change of pace. We'll be certain to work on the sound ballance in the future.

[Thumbs up]

Get back on track, Groove mac Sketch! Don't mind the two stars. It's dangerous to post short and sketchy content, everyone expects more on this platform… like whoot. But I can relate and I give you the thumbs up as well!
Keep up the work!

sketchysketchist responds:

Thanks. I intend to do long content after this. I'm just conflicted by how long it too overwhelming for me. My end goal is do upload something daily, whether it be a comic or animation.

[Goku VS Beerus]

It’s a kind of abstract program to work with. If you want to make animations (less stickfigures) you should download “OpenToonz”. It’s a free animation program! I think they used it when making Spirit Away? (Studio Gibli) And you are able to render it/export. So you don’t need to record the whole screen.
Just a recommendation!
About the animation: It’s okay, not a big fan of stickfigures, but you could have added more frames making the movements more realistic and some effects, shaking for example.

Zixlity responds:

Alright Ill check it out, thanks for the advice. Checked out OpenToonz and I think its for me, when i get a better recording software i might be able to render them normally.