Yozan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vattaman The Mans-Spankcula]

I like it that you are original but your intros are too long and missleading. The title says "how to draw" but with all the logos and so on makes it as if it was a movie.
The song... it gave me a headache with all the different sounds ... sorry. Next time try to make it shorter but keep it in your style. Work on ^^

ToonymanStudios responds:

sorry for all that, but this was like an old project I had left behind (like a lost episode). I still have like 10 more that I like to release but i been between school, work and community services. so i have not had alot of time to properly make these. but one thing for sure these are all just pilots. you should read the description. non of these episodes are the real thing as they are for showing you (as per the title) what I plan on including into the real episodes. from real how to's and real show and tells.

this is the introductory series which is part 0 of 5 different types of series. no actual work should be expected from this series which has a total of 50 episode of me showing what to expect from the real series. and the music was also old tracks I created hopefully when i get time i will create better songs (FYI not that great with music). I could use some free ones but i wanted to keep everything original kinda like giving people a full show that is 100% natural and original. i aim to making this a great show for the real series i'm still working on the details.

[Mya Bub]

It was cute, but it was very short and didn't have any purpose. I do understand if it only was a "try-out" but we both agree that you could have done more with this. You clearly have potential! Sorry if I rated it 2-stars... but if you put more effort into this, you will go further! :)

VideaVice responds:

No problem. I need to find a program I'm confortable with and a subject and then I'd make a longer animation. Thanks for your comment.

[We don't talk anymore (Animation)]

I like how it's drawn and so on but you could have done more with this. It was basically the same frames repeated there and there. Also, don't forget to write in the description what song it is. Anyway, good job!

[Strong Viking Obstacle Run]

When I first saw this animation I thougt it was commercial for an app game or something. Good thing you put a link in the description!
This is just my opinion.. but would it not be more suiteable if you said something like "Even if you are a sheep, act like a Viking"? Like the strongviking website says "They are made" ^^
Despite this, Good Job! I like the style you made it in!

Artcraft responds:

Thx for your interpretation and positiv feedback.

[When you stub your toe]

I have to agree with BoxerBraydog! More details, add some effects making lightning glow etc. It was kinda slow in every scene ... making it less effective.
But I must say I can relate with this! Keep on making animations and do your best ^^

[Disgaea The Dark Adonis]

Is it something about Code Geass perhaps? ^^'
What is the story? Maybe you could write about it in the description? :)

princenoble responds:

Ok watch it againa

[Pmation "A Tall Tale"]

Bravo! Charming and entertaining is how I would describe this. Really Nice!

[Cal in Cartoon - Episode Eleven]

You wrote in a post at your page that you used flash for over a decade before using GoAnimate. Do you have any material left, from back then, uploaded somewhere? ^^

calmulligan responds:

YouTube: "Starship One". And there's possibly a show called "Tragic Happiness" still on newgrounds under an old account somewhere :/ ...I should look for that actually; would be good to see how terrible I was :)

[father's jewel]

Wonderful! I love your work!

[Pyro]

Great work! ^^

Arfri responds:

Thanks!